Wednesday, 24 September 2014
Monday, 22 September 2014
Here is my paragraph that I wrote about cross country 2014.
Last Thursday we had cross country in our school.It was outside the court and the field.It was the 11 of September 2014.It was a beautiful day because the sun came out. At Cross Country there were lots of people there.My dad came to watch me and my sister running at the cross country.There were house names and their colours.I am in Mataatua house and we are green.Mr Burt was the starter of the day
When Mr Burt called out the year five girls I was excited and nervous at the same time.When I run, I know my dad is going to be proud of me. He reminded us to run around the cones. There were teachers on our way. When Mr Burt said ‘’ON YOUR MARKS SET GO’’! all of us ran.My dad and my sister were standing on the grass cheering for me. ‘’GO LOSELI’’! my sister yelled.I felt proud and strong to run as fast as I can.When I heard my dad’s voice it made me run faster
Along the way I was feeling very tired.I thought to myself I needed some water to drink.My dad gave me a bottle of water.I drank half of the water then I kept running to the end of the finished line.There were many people in front of me.My goal for cross country is to run without stopping.I was happy to finish the race.
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I'm so thankful that cross country is only once a year.”Keep running and don't stop” I told myself. Mud squelched under my feet as I ran through the reserve. I could hear my heart pounding against my chest as I inhaled and exhaled. With a final burst of energy and effort I sprinted towards the finished.”Yay” everybody cheered.
Tuesday, 16 September 2014
Thursday, 11 September 2014
Friday, 5 September 2014
Here is my paragraph. Look and see where I have put the correct punctuation marks.
World leaders are gathering in Washington today,To discuss the worsening water crisis. ‘’Water may soon need to be Rationed ‘’said President Amelia topp if we carry on wasting it. There simply won’t be enough to go round.
Today my score is 6/16
Wednesday, 3 September 2014
Africa is a continent and it has the largest population in the world.It is made in many countries and has many different cultures.The climate rangers from tropical to southuptic.The main sources of foods are rice,vegetables,eggs and beans.Africa also has lots of fied lifes witch in cludes elephants, lions, camals, and girafes.
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Tuesday, 2 September 2014
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Have you been to Africa? In Africa there are 54 countries in one continent. Africa is the world’s second largest population in the world. At about 30.2 million km including adjacent islands, it covers six percent of earth’s total surface area and 20.4 of the total land area. In Africa people eat green bananas,rice,curry,wheat,garlic and onions.In they language they speak Somali,igbo and Fulani.